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Another Blow To The Heart by ~sa-chan:iconsa-chan:



       Another blow to the heart
        Blood splatters from the wound
       Another blow to the heart

     (T h e y like you better d e a d)
  So useless and yet used

Another
           blow
                to the
                        heart


Self esteem steadily dropping

Another
          blow
               to the
                       heart


No longer good at all she was

Another
           blow
                to the
                        heart


Slowly stopped caring; this was her fault

Another
          blow
               to the
                       heart


Invisible and so painfully ugly

Another
           blow
                to the
                        heart


Trying so hard not to fall down

Another
          blow
               to the
                      heart


  Fall asleep and dream
     (They l i k e you b e t t e r there)

        Another blow to the heart
        Blood splatters from the wound
       Another blow to the heart
©2005-2009 ~sa-chan
:iconsa-chan:

Author's Comments

I hope I posted this in the right place. Anyways, I wrote this last week when I was having a very bad Friday. I punched a wall. >.>:

I'm not sure what I was trying to do here. So forgive me if you don't like it.

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:iconelvida:
i like the patterning of it.

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one word: pwned.
:iconsa-chan:
lol, i think i had over did the "another blow to the heart" thing, but hey, i was really pissed off.

--
I gave you these roses
But I left in the thorns
I'd rather hurt someone than hurt myself
I'll dispose of you like a lighter out of fuel
I'll lose you on a dusty shelf


~Sense Fail: Choke On This

_ Sen _
:iconzeffy:
Blood platters from the wound

Punching walls. tsk. :000 Ah well. At least you're better now?

--
:matrixfight:

no reason to live without you.
:iconsa-chan:
I believe so. Omar makes me feel better. =P

--
I gave you these roses
But I left in the thorns
I'd rather hurt someone than hurt myself
I'll dispose of you like a lighter out of fuel
I'll lose you on a dusty shelf


~Sense Fail: Choke On This

_ Sen _
:iconzeffy:
Jairo doesn't make me feel better.

--
:matrixfight:

no reason to live without you.
:iconflamelon:
cool. like the format. cool poem.

--
I'd like to be under the sea
In an octopus's garden with you

it was there
and I lost it.
:iconsa-chan:
i have to edit it. but thanks.

--
I gave you these roses
But I left in the thorns
I'd rather hurt someone than hurt myself
I'll dispose of you like a lighter out of fuel
I'll lose you on a dusty shelf


~Sense Fail: Choke On This

_ Sen _
:iconsa-chan:
i have to edit it. but thanks.

--
I gave you these roses
But I left in the thorns
I'd rather hurt someone than hurt myself
I'll dispose of you like a lighter out of fuel
I'll lose you on a dusty shelf


~Sense Fail: Choke On This

_ Sen _
:iconflamelon:
editing is good. like it :)

--
I'd like to be under the sea
In an octopus's garden with you

it was there
and I lost it.

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